Showing posts with label JAG. Show all posts
Showing posts with label JAG. Show all posts

Sunday, March 15, 2015

JAG Fanfic: Shared Passions


Read at Fanfiction.net: Shared Passions

Pairings: Animal/Maegyn 

Summary: Maegyn has seen Animal before when she was a nugget in VF-41 but he left before they could get acquainted, but now he was back in the Black Aces, a senior officer, a lieutenant commander in the zone for O-5. The attraction was still there…will they or won't they take advantage of the situation.



Friday, March 13, 2015

JAG Fanfic: Damned Spooks


Read at Fanfiction.net: Damned Spooks 

Pairings: Harm/Catherine Gale

Summary: Animal and the CIA do not play well together. Webb requires air support for a mission to go after Sadik Fahd and his Al Qaeda cohorts. Catherine and Harm have opted to continue the façade of marriage for her mother's sake. Catherine Gale/Harm Rabb R. This is after Paraguay post-Back In The Saddle; Mac and Harm have had a complete and utter falling out; their relationship is in tatters.  

Author's Note: This story is not connected with byrhthelm's "Giving It A Try"; though I do blame him for making Catherine's character so appealing that I have had to watch Pas de Deux several times as a result.  

 

JAG Fanfic: Burdens of Heritage


Read at Fanfiction.net: Burdens of Heritage 

Pairings: Animal/Tracy Manetti

Summary: A relationship borne of a close-working environment at the Pentagon is tested when Animal gets a call from relatives in Japan to come back to Japan to attend a soshiki of a much-loved uncle due to a motor vehicle accident involving a USN serviceman and a Japanese pedestrian.

JAG Fanfic: "I Shall Cry Unto The Heav'ns (Till The Stars Weep In Sorrow)"

A JAG Leonard Nimoy Tribute



A Bud Roberts JAG Fic.  

Summary: A Leonard Nimoy Tribute from JAG's Trek-fan. 

JAG Fanfiction: JAG: Rose Petals

Read at Fanfiction.net: JAG: Rose Petals

Pairings: Various.

Summary: JAG Drabbles.

JAG Fanfic: Mentor


Read at Fanfiction.net: Mentor 

Pairings: Animal/Meg

Summary: Everyone knows Animal has been a mentor to many aviators in the United States Navy, but at one point Animal had a mentor of his own. 

JAG Fanfic: Angels We Have Heard On High


Read at Fanfic.net: Angels We Have Heard On High

Pairings: Animal/Meg; Harm/Mac

Summary: The National Tree Lighting Ceremony at the White House.

JAG Fanfic: I'll Be Home


Read at Fanfiction.net: I'll Be Home

Pairings: Animal/Lia

Summary: Task Force 80 is in the Med and those at JAG are worried about their significant others.  

JAG Fanfic: Makoto's Tale


Read at Fanfiction.net: Makoto's Tale

Pairing: Harm/Mac; Animal/Meg

Summary: "An American MIA comes home." 



Friday, September 19, 2014

JAG Fanfic: "Fair Winds" Status: In Progress


Read at Fanfiction.net  Fair Winds

Pairing: Animal/Meg, Harm/Mac

Summary: After forty years in the Navy, Animal decides that all good things must come to an end.

Tuesday, September 9, 2014

JAG Fanfic: "On Angels' Wings" Status: Complete


Read at Fanfiction.net  On Angels' Wings

Pairing: Animal/Meg, Harm/Mac

Summary: With the events of September 11th fresh in their minds, the JAG crew prepare for the ceremonies to mark the 2nd anniversary of that fateful day.

Sunday, September 7, 2014

Hot Button Topic: Mary Sues and their counterpart Marty Stu - and the JAG (Military) Mary Sue.

Holy Jumpin' Jehosephat.  When the hell does she find time to sleep?  
or the "I can't fit everything on the proper side because I've got too many fucking medals" syndrome

"The archetypal Military Mary Sue"
  
  1. Wounded so many times in battle she can't walk through an airport metal detector without setting it off.
  2. More decorations and attachments (meaning subsequent awards) than a person can acquire in one lifetime, let alone three.
  3. Been to Iraq, Afghanistan so many times that she's lost count.  
  4. Fast tracked all the way to O-6 before she hits 25 because she's good like that.
  5. Is only 25 but she's managed to find enough time to pass Marine Jump School, study to become a Naval Aviator; and go through BUD/s training to become a SEAL.  
  6. has "won" not "received" the Medal of Honor because to her, everything is a competition and if you ain't won the blue button, you ain't won shit. 
  7. Is going to somehow get promoted to Fleet Admiral (5-stars) even though that rank hasn't been in use since the 1950s.  
  8. Is an expert marksman in both rifle and pistol, can shoot anything in the US military inventory up to and including the M65 Atomic Cannon...and damned near everything in the Soviet military arsenal too.  
  9. Went to the Air Force for an year to show them "how its done" even though she's 25.  
  10. Commanded a Navy fighter squadron, a Navy SEAL unit all at the same time.  
  11. Is planning to qualify to become an astronaut at the age of 26.  
  12. Shot down so many MiGs Erich Hartmann (the ranking ace) is threatening to come back from the afterlife to get a few more kills before she overtakes him.  She's coming up on 335 kills (17 shy of his record).  Yeah...she's that damned good.  
  13. Can tell the admiral off in 17 different languages and in Ancient Urdu too.  
  14. She's also planning on going to law school concurrently as she's taking astronaut training.  After all with what happened during Season 1 Recovery, hell, NASA will need a JAG lawyer too.  
  15. Can come up with a solution faster than the canon cast can come up with a problem; will more often than not solve the problem before the cast can even come up with the problem.  
  16. "Everybody likes me!!!"  and she can get anyone she wants with a crook of her little finger.   
  17. She can kick anyone's ass...since she knows 15 different types of martial arts.
  18. Always the first one to come up with a solution while everyone else stands around looking at each other or in adulation of her.   
  19. (more to come when I can think up of more). 
Are you writing a Military Mary Sue or Marty Stu?

The Navy Cross - Bauble or Award?

Navy Cross
Navy Cross - ribbon
The medal that you are looking at is the second most prestigious medal in the United States Navy Precedence chart.  

The criteria for awarding the Navy Cross are as follows:  
The Navy Cross may be awarded to any member of the U.S. Armed Forces while serving with the Navy, Marine Corps, or Coast Guard (in time of war only) who distinguishes himself or herself in action by extraordinary heroism not justifying an award of the Medal of Honor. The action must take place under one of three circumstances:
  1. While engaged in action against an enemy of the United States
  2. While engaged in military operations involving conflict with an opposing foreign force
  3. While serving with friendly foreign forces engaged in an armed conflict in which the United States is not a belligerent party.
The act(s) to be commended must be performed in the presence of great danger or at great personal risk and must be performed in such a manner as to render the individual highly conspicuous among others of equal grade, rate, experience, or position of responsibility. An accumulation of minor acts of heroism does not justify an award of the Navy Cross. As originally authorized, the Navy Cross could be awarded for distinguished non-combat acts, but legislation of 7 August 1942 limited the award to acts of combat heroism.
There is a reason why this medal is the 2nd highest honor in the United States Military Heraldry.

Yet we see many instances of JAG characters adorned with the Navy Cross with no idea as to why they were awarded the honor.

We know why Admiral AJ Chegwidden was awarded the Navy Cross - events during 1968 during the Tet Offensive when he was in-country.



But there are other instances:

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As Spanofan points out, he is a "single cruise" officer.  There is no way that he would have made O-6 doing a single sea-tour.  Was his single tour out to Desert Storm on CAP where he got jumped by a whole squadron of Iraqi MiG 23s?  Who the hell knows?  But that ribbon doesn't make sense.  By the time he hits O-6 he would have had a considerable number of stars on the sea-service ribbon.  So my question is where the hell would he have had the time or instance to be involved in a "combat situation" that would merit a Navy Cross?   


Major General Butler in Desert Son, yet again a single sea-service yet a single bronze star on his Joint Sea Service ribbon.  How can you do that and find the time to get a Navy Cross?  Was it in the same Offensive where AJ earned his?  He also served in Desert Storm in Kuwait as he has a Liberation of Kuwait and SW Asia Service 

(to be continued)
  

Character Analysis: Why Sarah "Mac" Mackenzie isn't St. Mac the Divine

 St. Mac the Divine?
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I used to be a Harm/Mac Shipper. I really did. At one point, I used to write Mac as Mac the Invincible. The thing was...I grew out of it the more I watched the show.

Let's see what The Powers That Be (henceforth referred to as TPTB) wrote Mac as (or as I refer to her as "Canon(ical)-Mac". She was an alcoholic (full stop). She had to stay away from the bottle for fear of relapsing. She hasn't attended an Alcoholics Anonymous meeting in years. On top of that she is married, does not disclose her marital status to the Marine Corps when she joined (who the hell knows where Chris Ragle was all this time other than making enemies who want to kill him) - that is known as falsifying her marital status to join the Marine Corps. The seriousness of this offence isn't a matter of just saying "Oops, I'm sorry, I forgot that I was married." Married means being entitled to benefits. She may have opted to go without those benefits by saying that she wasn't married when she was. But what happens if the spouse all of a sudden appears showing documents that she was married. It's a black mark on the Corps. For this kind of offence the UCMJ prescribes charge under Punitive Article 83 of the Uniform Code of Military Justice.

“Any person who—

(1) procures his own enlistment or appointment in the armed forces by knowingly false representation or deliberate concealment as to his qualifications for that enlistment or appointment and receives pay or allowances thereunder; or
(1) Fraudulent enlistment or appointment.
(a) That the accused was enlisted or appointed in an armed force;
(b) That the accused knowingly misrepresented or deliberately concealed a certain material fact or facts regarding qualifications of the accused for enlistment or appointment;
(c) That the accused’s enlistment or appointment was obtained or procured by that knowingly false representation or deliberate concealment; and
(d) That under this enlistment or appointment that accused received pay or allowances or both.
Explanation: (1) In general. A fraudulent enlistment, appointment, or separation is one procured by either a knowingly false representation as to any of the qualifications prescribed by law, regulation, or orders for the specific enlistment, appointment, or separation, or a deliberate concealment as to any of those disqualifications. Matters that may be material to an enlistment, appointment, or separation include any information used by the recruiting, appointing, or separating officer in reaching a decision as to enlistment, appointment, or separation in any particular case, and any information that normally would have been so considered had it been provided to that officer.

 Maximum punishment. (1) Fraudulent enlistment or appointment. Dishonorable discharge, forfeiture of all pay and allowances, and confinement for 2 years.
Compounding that problem, when she is assigned to Okinawa she has an adulterous affair with a senior officer; Grounds for an Article 133 charge
“Any commissioned officer, cadet, or midshipman who is convicted of conduct unbecoming an officer and a gentleman shall be punished as a court-martial may direct.”
(1) That the accused did or omitted to do certain acts; and
(2) That, under the circumstances, these acts or omissions constituted conduct unbecoming an officer and gentleman.

Explanation.

(1) Gentleman. As used in this article, “gentleman” includes both male and female commissioned officers, cadets, and midshipmen.
(2) Nature of offense. Conduct violative of this article is action or behavior in an official capacity which, in dishonoring or disgracing the person as an officer, seriously compromises the officer’s character as a gentleman, or action or behavior in an unofficial or private capacity which, in dishonoring or disgracing the officer personally, seriously compromises the person’s standing as an officer. There are certain moral attributes common to the ideal officer and the perfect gentleman, a lack of which is indicated by acts of dishonesty, unfair dealing, indecency, indecorum, lawlessness, injustice, or cruelty. Not everyone is or can be expected to meet unrealistically high moral standards, but there is a limit of tolerance based on customs of the service and military necessity below which the personal standards of an officer, cadet, or midshipman cannot fall without seriously compromising the person’s standing as an officer, cadet, or midshipman or the person’s character as a gentleman. This article prohibits conduct by a commissioned officer, cadet or midshipman which, taking all the circumstances into consideration, is thus compromising. This article includes acts made punishable by any other article, provided these acts amount to conduct unbecoming an officer and a gentleman. Thus, a commissioned officer who steals property violates both this article and Article 121. Whenever the offense charged is the same as a specific offense set forth in this Manual, the elements of proof are the same as those set forth in the paragraph which treats that specific offense, with the additional requirement that the act or omission constitutes conduct unbecoming an officer and gentleman.
(3) Examples of offenses. Instances of violation of this article include knowingly making a false official statement; dishonorable failure to pay a debt; cheating on an exam; opening and reading a letter of another without authority; using insulting or defamatory language to another officer in that officer’s presence or about that officer to other military persons; being drunk and disorderly in a public place; public association with known prostitutes; committing or attempting to commit a crime involving moral turpitude; and failing without good cause to support the officer’s family.

Maximum punishment : Dismissal, forfeiture of all pay and allowances, and confinement for a period not in excess of that authorized for the most analogous (similar) offense for which a punishment is prescribed in this Manual, or, if none is prescribed, for 1 year.
Right there, those two offences in itself would have drummed her out of the service, yet she is allowed to continue as a Marine and attain the rank of Captain, and further along Major. One cannot say Colonel John Farrow (the other party in the adultery) was wholly innocent, but he is not entirely guilty either. There are two parties to an act of adultery; both willing participants and as such would be 100% guilty of the Article 133 charge. Not to mention she would be co-charged under Article 134 (specifically Adultery) of the UCMJ.

The UCMJ says you can be charged with a violation if an extramarital affair has an adverse effect on unit "discipline, morale, or cohesion."
(1) That the accused wrongfully had sexual intercourse with a certain person;
(2) That, at the time, the accused or the other person was married to someone else; and
(3) That, under the circumstances, the conduct of the accused was to the prejudice of good order and discipline in the armed forces or was of a nature to bring discredit upon the armed forces.

Explanation.

(1) Nature of offense. Adultery is clearly unacceptable conduct, and it reflects adversely on the service record of the military member.
(2) Conduct prejudicial to good order and discipline or of a nature to bring discredit upon the armed forces. To constitute an offense under the UCMJ, the adulterous conduct must either be directly prejudicial to good order and discipline or service discrediting. Adulterous conduct that is directly prejudicial includes conduct that has an obvious, and measurably divisive effect on unit or organization discipline, morale, or cohesion, or is clearly detrimental to the authority or stature of or respect toward a servicemember. Adultery may also be service discrediting, even though the conduct is only indirectly or remotely prejudicial to good order and discipline. Discredit means to injure the reputation of the armed forces and includes adulterous conduct that has a tendency, because of its open or notorious nature, to bring the service into disrepute, make it subject to public ridicule, or lower it in public esteem. While adulterous conduct that is private and discreet in nature may not be service discrediting by this standard, under the circumstances, it may be determined to be conduct prejudicial to good order and discipline. Commanders should consider all relevant circumstances, including but not limited to the following factors, when determining whether adulterous acts are prejudicial to good order and discipline or are of a nature to bring discredit upon the armed forces:
(a) The accused's marital status, military rank, grade, or position;
(b) The co-actor's marital status, military rank, grade, and position, or relationship to the armed forces;
(c) The military status of the accused's spouse or the spouse of co-actor, or their relationship to the armed forces;
(d) The impact, if any, of the adulterous relationship on the ability of the accused, the co-actor, or the spouse of either to perform their duties in support of the armed forces;
(e) The misuse, if any, of government time and resources to facilitate the commission of the conduct;
(f) Whether the conduct persisted despite counseling or orders to desist; the flagrancy of the conduct, such as whether any notoriety ensued; and whether the adulterous act was accompanied by other violations of the UCMJ;
(g) The negative impact of the conduct on the units or organizations of the accused, the co-actor or the spouse of either of them, such as a detrimental effect on unit or organization morale, teamwork, and efficiency;
(h) Whether the accused or co-actor was legally separated; and
(i) Whether the adulterous misconduct involves an ongoing or recent relationship or is remote in time.
(3) Marriage. A marriage exists until it is dissolved in accordance with the laws of a competent state or foreign jurisdiction.
(4) Mistake of fact. A defense of mistake of fact exists if the accused had an honest and reasonable belief either that the accused and the co-actor were both unmarried, or that they were lawfully married to each other. If this defense is raised by the evidence, then the burden of proof is upon the United States to establish that the accused's belief was unreasonable or not honest.".
As one can see this whole UCMJ statute here would open up a can of worms for Sarah Mackenzie as the adultery charge would bring up a whole other charge of her "fraudulent appointment" as an officer of the USMC. Just these two points alone were making me wonder if the character creators at JAG were having a day off or something. Because there is no way that Major Sarah Mackenzie would have kept her grade of 1st Lieutenant let alone advanced in grade to Major. And her story as far as JAG was concerned would be over before it began. Let's see what the penalty says...
Maximum punishment: Dishonorable discharge, forfeiture of all pay and allowances, and confinement for 1 year.
 Ouch.

To Be Continued

JAG Fanfic: "Wild Horses n' Aviators" Status: In-Progress

Photo of Horses taken at Vancouver International Airport along Templeton Ave. 

Read at Fanfiction.net  Wild Horses n' Aviators

Pairings: Animal/Meg

Summary: "Come with me to Texas" – 5 meaningful words lead to a whole lot more.

JAG Fanfic: "Where Eagles Fly" Status: In-Progress

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Read at Fanfiction.net  Where Eagles Fly

Pairings: none (this is a war fic)

Summary: Some of the events in Harm and Animal's second deployment to the Persian Gulf – The First Gulf War

JAG Fanfic: "There Is No Spark Of Interest" Status: In-Progress


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FINAL COVER!


 Read at Fanfiction.net  There Is No Spark Of Interest

Pairings: Harm/Mac; Animal/Lia

Summary: Harriet sees another opportunity to "match-make" and Liandra is having none of it.

Author's Note: Lia was the character my wife came up with before we got married.  I absconded with Lia and use that character in my fics.  

JAG Fanfic: "Love Lift Us Up" Status: In-Progress

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Read at Fanfiction.net  Love Lift Us Up

Pairings: Animal/Meg; Harm/Mac

Summary: Tosh & Meg plan their wedding; while Harm's jealousy over Meg having found a relationship causes Mac to enlighten Harm as to how she feels about him. (sequel to Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder)

Warning: Some smut! (Don't say I didn't warn you!)

JAG Ficlet: "Texas Gal" Status: Complete


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Pairing: Animal/Meg

Summary: Ficlet: Animal's F-14 Tomcat – Harm's reaction to "Texas Gal".

JAG Fanfic: "Saudi Arabian Holiday" Status: Complete



Read at Fanfiction.net  Saudi Arabian Holiday

Pairings: Animal/Mac; Harm/Lia

Summary: AJ, Harm, Lia and Mac are taken hostage while in Iraq on a diplomatic mission. Needless to say a certain spook's mission goes south yet again.